another writing post

[redbird]

OK, now what? I thought this scene was going to be a hinge, but it's left Olivia no closer to a decision. It's a hinge for Mrs. Fish, and maybe for the story, but the only decision my protagonist has made in this section is to call her office and say she'll be in late.

Word count: this chapter, 1565 so far; today, 1132 and possibly counting; total, 63,208