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elisem's haiku earring party.
Comfortable vices
Sin was too difficult
for them, so they gossipped
and drank stolen tea.
The earrings in question have shiny brown beads.
The astute reader will note that the syllable pattern on this is 6-6-5; the 5-7-5 version isn't as good. You may insert a hyphen and line break before the c in "difficult" if it pleases you. The astute reader may also note that the word "gossipped" looks funny.
elisem's haiku earring party.Comfortable vices
Sin was too difficult
for them, so they gossipped
and drank stolen tea.
The earrings in question have shiny brown beads.
The astute reader will note that the syllable pattern on this is 6-6-5; the 5-7-5 version isn't as good. You may insert a hyphen and line break before the c in "difficult" if it pleases you. The astute reader may also note that the word "gossipped" looks funny.
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