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There was a revised, and expanded, manuscript chunk waiting for me this morning.
I've asked my contact how many revisions they get before we raise the fee for this; he thanked me for talking to him instead of directly to them, and said he'll see what he can do. I've also (in a later message) asked him for a revised schedule, one that incorporates revision cycles if we're going to have them.
Part of the problem is they don't seem to like "we have [verb]ed" twice in the same paragraph, or even repetition of "we". This for a report that is in the voice of an organization, about what the organization is doing. They haven't actually said so, but I think this means more stuff goes in the passive.
I've asked my contact how many revisions they get before we raise the fee for this; he thanked me for talking to him instead of directly to them, and said he'll see what he can do. I've also (in a later message) asked him for a revised schedule, one that incorporates revision cycles if we're going to have them.
Part of the problem is they don't seem to like "we have [verb]ed" twice in the same paragraph, or even repetition of "we". This for a report that is in the voice of an organization, about what the organization is doing. They haven't actually said so, but I think this means more stuff goes in the passive.