Is it supposed to be iambs? I'd read it as dactyls or anapests (depending on which way the single syllable feet should read), with a few blurs of syllable keeping it from being perfectly regular.
(I can't read the first line without it coming out in dactyls. TURN-ing-and-TURN-ing. . .)
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Date: 2004-09-08 07:00 pm (UTC)(I can't read the first line without it coming out in dactyls. TURN-ing-and-TURN-ing. . .)